lunes, 8 de noviembre de 2010

Composition

Once upon a time there was a cat fighting with a dog in a road and they started to run very fast for catch a beautiful golden car. The cat was crazy and had an iron toolbar. It hit the dog and the dog landed in a swimming-pool. The cat stole a huge plank and drew a dog, after that, the dog sculpt a beautiful cat. finally the cat and the dog fell in love.

by: Rubén Pozo, Rubén Martinez, Jesús Torres y Cristian Lara.




2 comentarios:

  1. Noa habéis corregido algunas de las cosas que os dije. "FOR CATCH" está mal. Miradlo, please.

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  2. Por cierto, le podríais haber dado un título al historia.

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